I absolutely love the structure, progression, and idea behind this piece. It's definitely made it into my top five PW fics of all time and I want to read it again already. The voices are so accurate and the exchange is absolutely adorable; I think it's the stage directions that definitely make it.
Lines that made me literally laugh out loud? I can feel you scowling from here, do stop, you'll get wrinkles doing that and then you won't be adorable anymore LIKE YOU ARE IN THE PICTURES. O Lawdy, the bold text XD
I got that text just after I dramatically shouted "Objection!". I didn't know you could text, let alone time it to go off at the second most inappropriate moment possible. Makes one wonder what's the first >:D
You should keep that cravat on all the time. *snerk* Reminds me of a piece of fanart I saw once...
Again, loved it and here's to hoping you'll produce many more fics in the future <3 (<--Not less than three)
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on 2007-11-13 04:03 am (UTC)Lines that made me literally laugh out loud?
I can feel you scowling from here, do stop, you'll get wrinkles doing that and then you won't be adorable anymore LIKE YOU ARE IN THE PICTURES.
O Lawdy, the bold text XD
I got that text just after I dramatically shouted "Objection!". I didn't know you could text, let alone time it to go off at the second most inappropriate moment possible.
Makes one wonder what's the first >:D
You should keep that cravat on all the time.
*snerk* Reminds me of a piece of fanart I saw once...
Again, loved it and here's to hoping you'll produce many more fics in the future <3 (<--Not less than three)